Evaluation!
what went well:
The things that i think when well is how clear it is to read and what kind of shop it is and were it is , is shown in the text.The logo that i made is in the right corner but its a bit hard to read, so maybe if  i made it a bit large to read. I have put a picture of a few brass and woodwind instruments to show  some of the instruments we do sell also the picture of the top is to advertise what we have and what it looks like! I have shown the date and time it will be open is clear to see. Also it says about a sale.The picture of the music note saying i love music is to be like a little mascot to the shop just to make it look cooler, but maybe i could write that its the mascot and make the picture smaller a bit.I done the back round in a silver colour like some instruments

      

To improve ! 

maybe i could make the mascot smaller in the left corner and actually write that it is so that you  know.Then i could make the logo large to read. I could put the sale word in big, bold writing.Maybe the time and date and place should be put together.The pictures backgrounds are white so i could find out how to change it to the silver colour on the very back.